Project Monitoring Week Four

I have successfully finished all three of my articles so they will be ready for when I do Indesign work. I started with my article 'The Evolution of Style'. I had looked at my article planning sheet which helped me in writing the tone of the article and the language needed. I also looked at the research I had done earlier and another look at the sites to see what I information I need. I then wrote my articles which was quite simple but took quite a long time because there was so much information and I had to be selective in what information I was going to put in the article. After I wrote my article, I gave it to a peer so they could review it and give me any feedback straight away so I could edit the article slightly because they only had small corrections.

I then wrote the article for 'Death by Fashion'. I again followed the same process by looking at my article planning sheet so I knew how I was going to write my article in what register and the linguistics. I then re-read the articles in my research log so I could select what information was vital to be in my article. I then wrote my article focusing on four different sections and then for each section adding a how to stop it section. This was again quite a lengthy process because I wanted to get everything right and making sure all necessary info was in. After I had finished the first draft, I again gave it to a peer so they could give me feedback so I could make the final correction.

I have also made the changes to 'The Anti-Social Network'. This was quick because there were only small changes from the feedback I received from my focus groups that I conducted when I did my mock-ups. I could not find any statistics that were more suitable to my focus group so I deleted some less vital stats to make my article more adult and relevant to my audience.